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Busadah Streesse 19752 5090 Amsterdam 45 32nd August
Dear Tim,
I saw your advert for pen pals. I live in Netherlands and I would like to meet English nice people. I think you're nice. My hobbies are: doing sports, playing on computer and playing with the diabolo ( I have one from England). I began studying English 6-7 years ago, but I’ve never been to England, but I would like to go in England and see with you some sport games.I can teach you how to play with the diabolo because it's very funny and it's like a sport. Someday you can show me the city and we could visit the Chelsea FC's stadium. We are a small family. I’m the only child. It’s boring sometimes. Well, that’s me! I would like to have you like a brother. Write me about your family. I’m looking forward to see what you’ll write for me. Best wishes, Ţiţei Şaormă Târnăcop
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time.I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait. Bianca.b
How are you? I hope well ! My name is, Raluca. I live in Romania, and I’m thirteen years old. We aren’t a big family. I’m an only child. I like to meet people from other countries. In my free time, I get out with my friends in town. I love animals! My hobbies are the dance, painting and pop music. I like Roxette! I am a big fan. They come in Bucharest on 30th May. I barely wait !!!
PS: I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !
I hope you write me as soon !!! Best wishes, Raluca
Florida’s Turnpike 777 6951 Miami 12th May Dear Tim Cruise, I have seen your advert for penpals.I live in U.S.A in state Miami and I’m seeing we have the same hobby. My hobby is doing a lot of sport,like yours.I began to make pushups,squats,abdomens,sports in general. I began doing sports from my second grader because it was very cool.Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep. I love going to the gym because there I can meet a lot of people sports like me and I can increase my Immune System.
Tom Cruise Dear teacher Mrs. Tom Cruise is an athletic and intelligent person. He loves to do pushups and squats. He loves to eat something healthy such as spinach, tomatoes and cabbage. Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries. He hates fat food that is rich in fat.
Daniel Love
Camelia Pagila Road football, block 100, entrance A, floor 10
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time. I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait. bianca.b
Giurgiu,str.Flying Crane,bl.1313 sc.ABC,ap.666,Romania 12th May
Dear Roy Parker,
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romania.I love animals and I have a dog and a cat.Dog’s name is Motu and cat’s name is Tom.I love the music.My favorite band is Green Day.I began studying English six years ago and I want to go in England soon.I haven’t got brothers or sisters,but I have many friends.I like to walk with my friends in the park. Well,that’s me. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Giurgiu,Romania str Bucuresti,blc b1/1s,sc E,ap 85 14th May
Dear Roy Parker, I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romanian and I would to meet you.I love animals,too.The most good exemple is mi cat,Tomitza,It’s so sweet.I’m an only child at the family.It’s borring,but It’s good because I don’t have a sister or a brothe who upset me.It’s only one problem,I don’t like Roxette,but It’s not a dilemma. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Giurgiu,str.Flying Crane,bl.1313 sc.ABC,ap.666,Romania 12th May
Dear Roy Parker,
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romania.I love animals and I have a dog and a cat.Dog’s name is Motu and cat’s name is Tom.I love the music.My favorite band is Green Day.I began studying English six years ago and I want to go in England soon.I haven’t got brothers or sisters,but I have many friends.I like to walk with my friends in the park. Well,that’s me. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time. I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait. bianca.b
Tom Cruise Dear teacher Mrs. Tom Cruise is an athletic and intelligent person. He loves to do pushups and squats. He loves to eat something healthy such as spinach, tomatoes and cabbage. Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries. He hates fat food that is rich in fat.
Daniel Love
Camelia Pagila Road football, block 100, entrance A, floor 10
Florida’s Turnpike 777 6951 Miami 12th May Dear Tim Cruise, I have seen your advert for penpals.I live in U.S.A in state Miami and I’m seeing we have the same hobby. My hobby is doing a lot of sport,like yours.I began to make pushups,squats,abdomens,sports in general. I began doing sports from my second grader because it was very cool.Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep. I love going to the gym because there I can meet a lot of people sports like me and I can increase my Immune System.
How are you? I hope well ! My name is, Raluca. I live in Romania, and I’m thirteen years old. We aren’t a big family. I’m an only child. I like to meet people from other countries. In my free time, I get out with my friends in town. I love animals! My hobbies are the dance, painting and pop music. I like Roxette! I am a big fan. They come in Bucharest on 30th May. I barely wait !!!
PS: I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !
I hope you write me as soon !!! Best wishes, Raluca
STR BUCURESTI, BL ?(NUMBER), SC E, AP 85(?) GIURGIU, ROMANIA 14TH MAY
I LIVE IN ROMANIA THE MOST BETTER EXAMPLE IS MY CAT IT'S SO SWEET! I'M THE ONLY CHILD IN MY FAMILY IT'S BORING, BUT IS WELL (SOMETHING), BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE A SISTER OR BROTHER TO UPSET ME.
WITHOUT "Hello Tim" "I'M SORRY THAT I have not WRITTEN TO YOU A LONG WHILE. I'M WRITING TO you to invite ..." "I'M WAITING" IS BETTER THAN "I wait". WRITE WITH CAPITAL LETTERS "bianca.b", AND WITHOUT POINT BETWEEN "bianca" AND "b"
1.The address is before the "dear...". 2.Is "Dear Teacher, Tom Cruise is...." not "Tom Cruise Dear teacher..."
3."Mrs.Tom Cruise" means Misses Tom Cruise and is Mister Tom Cruise with Mr. 4."Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries."-it cannot be "like love" you wanna say "He like banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries" or "He love....". 5."He hates fat food that is rich in fat."-I really don't know what you wanna say here but I suppose you wanna say "He hates food that is rich in fat". 6.It is not correct "Daniel Love" is "With love,Daniel"
"Florida’s Turnpike 777 6951 Miami 12th May" - I don't think this is your address.
"I live in U.S.A in state Miami..." - You better say "I live in U.S.A,in Miami..." "My hobby IS DOING a lot of sport,like YOURS"-My hobby is to do a lot of sport, like your because is like your hobby. "my second grader"- my second grade not grader "Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep." - you used the past, it cannot be I'll because is the future. "a lot of people sports" - you better say a lot of sportive people.
"...and I’m thirteen years old" - you can say just I'm thirteen because is shorter. I'm the only child not "I am an only child" "I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !"- you better say I'd like to go to Roxette's concert together. I hope you'll write me soon
Giurgiu, Romania Street Bucharest, BLC b1/1s, E sc, ap 85 May 14th
Dear Roy Parker I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romanian and I Would Love To Meet you.I Animals, too.The most good example is my cat, Tomitza, It's so sweet.I 'm only child at the family.It year' s borring , But It's Good Because I do not Have a sister of the broth or Who upset me.It 's only one problem, I do not like Roxette, But It's not a dilemma. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes, Bianca D.
Dear Roy Parker I saw the ad for pepni. I love you in Romanian and I love animals love. Love is the best example for you. My cat, Tomitza, It's so sweet!. But it's good Because I Do Not Have a sister of the brother who offended him. It's just a name like Roxette but the problem is a dilemma. We look forward to hearing
Busadah Streesse 19752
ReplyDelete5090 Amsterdam 45
32nd August
Dear Tim,
I saw your advert for pen pals. I live in Netherlands and I would like to meet English nice people. I think you're nice.
My hobbies are: doing sports, playing on computer and playing with the diabolo ( I have one from England).
I began studying English 6-7 years ago, but I’ve never been to England, but I would like to go in England and see with you some sport games.I can teach you how to play with the diabolo because it's very funny and it's like a sport. Someday you can show me the city and we could visit the Chelsea FC's stadium.
We are a small family. I’m the only child. It’s boring sometimes. Well, that’s me! I would like to have you like a brother. Write me about your family.
I’m looking forward to see what you’ll write for me.
Best wishes,
Ţiţei Şaormă Târnăcop
Street:Puisor
ReplyDeleteGiurgiu
11th may
Dear Tin Cruise,
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time.I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait.
Bianca.b
Romania,Giurgiu
ReplyDeleteStr.Decebal
11th May
Dear Roy Parker,
How are you? I hope well !
My name is, Raluca. I live in Romania, and I’m thirteen years old. We aren’t a big family. I’m an only child.
I like to meet people from other countries. In my free time, I get out with my friends in town. I love animals! My hobbies are the dance, painting and pop music. I like Roxette! I am a big fan. They come in Bucharest on 30th May. I barely wait !!!
PS: I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !
I hope you write me as soon !!!
Best wishes,
Raluca
Florida’s Turnpike 777
ReplyDelete6951 Miami
12th May
Dear Tim Cruise,
I have seen your advert for penpals.I live in U.S.A in state Miami and I’m seeing we have the same hobby.
My hobby is doing a lot of sport,like yours.I began to make pushups,squats,abdomens,sports in general.
I began doing sports from my second grader because it was very cool.Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep.
I love going to the gym because there I can meet a lot of people sports like me and I can increase my Immune System.
With respect,
Razvan
Tom Cruise
ReplyDeleteDear teacher Mrs. Tom Cruise is an athletic and intelligent person.
He loves to do pushups and squats. He loves to eat something healthy such as spinach, tomatoes and cabbage.
Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries.
He hates fat food that is rich in fat.
Daniel Love
Camelia Pagila
Road football, block 100, entrance A, floor 10
Street:Puisor
ReplyDeleteGiurgiu
11th may
Dear Tin Cruise,
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time. I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait.
bianca.b
Giurgiu,str.Flying Crane,bl.1313
ReplyDeletesc.ABC,ap.666,Romania
12th May
Dear Roy Parker,
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romania.I love animals and I have a dog and a cat.Dog’s name is Motu and cat’s name is Tom.I love the music.My favorite band is Green Day.I began studying English six years ago and I want to go in England soon.I haven’t got brothers or sisters,but I have many friends.I like to walk with my friends in the park.
Well,that’s me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
With love,
Andra
Andra
Giurgiu,Romania
ReplyDeletestr Bucuresti,blc b1/1s,sc E,ap 85
14th May
Dear Roy Parker,
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romanian and I would to meet you.I love animals,too.The most good exemple is mi cat,Tomitza,It’s so sweet.I’m an only child at the family.It’s borring,but It’s good because I don’t have a sister or a brothe who upset me.It’s only one problem,I don’t like Roxette,but It’s not a dilemma.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Bianca D.
Giurgiu,str.Flying Crane,bl.1313
ReplyDeletesc.ABC,ap.666,Romania
12th May
Dear Roy Parker,
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romania.I love animals and I have a dog and a cat.Dog’s name is Motu and cat’s name is Tom.I love the music.My favorite band is Green Day.I began studying English six years ago and I want to go in England soon.I haven’t got brothers or sisters,but I have many friends.I like to walk with my friends in the park.
Well,that’s me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
With love,
Andra
Street:Puisor
ReplyDeleteGiurgiu
11th may
Dear Tin Cruise,
Hello Tim.I have not talked of long time. I wrote you to invite you at the basketball game from my city next week because I know that you like very much the sports. I hope to meet you. I wait.
bianca.b
Tom Cruise
ReplyDeleteDear teacher Mrs. Tom Cruise is an athletic and intelligent person.
He loves to do pushups and squats. He loves to eat something healthy such as spinach, tomatoes and cabbage.
Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries.
He hates fat food that is rich in fat.
Daniel Love
Camelia Pagila
Road football, block 100, entrance A, floor 10
Florida’s Turnpike 777
ReplyDelete6951 Miami
12th May
Dear Tim Cruise,
I have seen your advert for penpals.I live in U.S.A in state Miami and I’m seeing we have the same hobby.
My hobby is doing a lot of sport,like yours.I began to make pushups,squats,abdomens,sports in general.
I began doing sports from my second grader because it was very cool.Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep.
I love going to the gym because there I can meet a lot of people sports like me and I can increase my Immune System.
With respect,
Razvan
Romania,Giurgiu
ReplyDeleteStr.Decebal
11th May
Dear Roy Parker,
How are you? I hope well !
My name is, Raluca. I live in Romania, and I’m thirteen years old. We aren’t a big family. I’m an only child.
I like to meet people from other countries. In my free time, I get out with my friends in town. I love animals! My hobbies are the dance, painting and pop music. I like Roxette! I am a big fan. They come in Bucharest on 30th May. I barely wait !!!
PS: I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !
I hope you write me as soon !!!
Best wishes,
Raluca
ENGLISH POLICE
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB, MIHAI!
DANI T.
STR BUCURESTI, BL ?(NUMBER), SC E, AP 85(?)
ReplyDeleteGIURGIU, ROMANIA
14TH MAY
I LIVE IN ROMANIA
THE MOST BETTER EXAMPLE IS MY CAT
IT'S SO SWEET!
I'M THE ONLY CHILD IN MY FAMILY
IT'S BORING, BUT IS WELL (SOMETHING), BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE A SISTER OR BROTHER TO UPSET ME.
I THINK IS BETTER TO USE "PROBLEM" THAN "DILEMMA"
DANI T. CORRECTED BIANCA D.'S HOMEWORK
str.Flying Crane(?),bl.1313(?)
ReplyDeletesc.ABC(?),ap.666(?)
GIURGIU, ROMANIA
12th May
IT ISN'T CORRECT "I want to go SOON in England"?
WELL DONE, ANDRA!
DANI T. CORRECTED ANDRA B.'S HOMEWORK
Street:Puisor
ReplyDeleteGiurgiu
11th may
Dear TIM Cruise,
WITHOUT "Hello Tim"
"I'M SORRY THAT I have not WRITTEN TO YOU A LONG WHILE. I'M WRITING TO you to invite ..."
"I'M WAITING" IS BETTER THAN "I wait".
WRITE WITH CAPITAL LETTERS "bianca.b", AND WITHOUT POINT BETWEEN "bianca" AND "b"
DANI T. CORRECTED BIANCA B.'S HOMEWORK
1.The address is before the "dear...".
ReplyDelete2.Is "Dear Teacher,
Tom Cruise is...." not "Tom Cruise
Dear teacher..."
3."Mrs.Tom Cruise" means Misses Tom Cruise and is Mister Tom Cruise with Mr.
4."Like love banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries."-it cannot be "like love" you wanna say "He like banana fruit, cantaloupe and blueberries" or "He love....".
5."He hates fat food that is rich in fat."-I really don't know what you wanna say here but I suppose you wanna say "He hates food that is rich in fat".
6.It is not correct "Daniel Love" is "With love,Daniel"
I hope you'll work harder!!
Gelu corrected Daniel's homework
"Florida’s Turnpike 777
ReplyDelete6951 Miami
12th May" - I don't think this is your address.
"I live in U.S.A in state Miami..." - You better say "I live in U.S.A,in Miami..."
"My hobby IS DOING a lot of sport,like YOURS"-My hobby is to do a lot of sport, like your because is like your hobby.
"my second grader"- my second grade not grader
"Sometimes I’m very tired and I’ll sleep." - you used the past, it cannot be I'll because is the future.
"a lot of people sports" - you better say a lot of sportive people.
Gelu corrected Razvan's homework.
"...and I’m thirteen years old" - you can say just I'm thirteen because is shorter.
ReplyDeleteI'm the only child not "I am an only child"
"I'd like us to go to concerts with Roxette, together !"- you better say I'd like to go to Roxette's concert together.
I hope you'll write me soon
Gelu corrected Raluca's homework
Giurgiu, Romania
ReplyDeleteStreet Bucharest, BLC b1/1s, E sc, ap 85
May 14th
Dear Roy Parker
I saw your advert for penpals.I live in Romanian and I Would Love To Meet you.I Animals, too.The most good example is my cat, Tomitza, It's so sweet.I 'm only child at the family.It year' s borring , But It's Good Because I do not Have a sister of the broth or Who upset me.It 's only one problem, I do not like Roxette, But It's not a dilemma.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Bianca D.
Dear Roy Parker
I saw the ad for pepni. I love you in Romanian and I love animals love. Love is the best example for you. My cat, Tomitza, It's so sweet!. But it's good Because I Do Not Have a sister of the brother who offended him. It's just a name like Roxette but the problem is a dilemma.
We look forward to hearing
Best wishes,
Bianca.D
Daniel.C corrected Bianca.D 's homeworck's